Thursday, 4 July 2019

Sea turtle life

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  2. Hello Saul
    I love the way you described the sea turtles life, it is very descriptive i like it a lot but, it does get less descriptive towards the bottom of the document, there is room some for improvement for the amount detail. But apart from that its great. : )

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